1. Posted: November 4, 2012In:

    A young female assassin becomes the target when her ex-SAS uncle comes looking for revenge for the murder of his brother, her abusive father.

    GriffUK

    Thanks Karel, great feedback that will be put to good use. Revision coming soon.

    Thanks Karel, great feedback that will be put to good use. Revision coming soon.

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  2. Posted: November 11, 2012In:

    An idealistic priest is hunted by Church agents after he uncovers a plot to release a virus that targets non believers.

    GriffUK

    Thanks to both of you for the feedback, I'll be back with a revision soon.

    Thanks to both of you for the feedback, I’ll be back with a revision soon.

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2012In:

    An idealistic priest is hunted by Church agents after he uncovers a plot to release a virus that targets non believers.

    GriffUK

    Originally it was intended as a discussion between religion and morality, the latter being being built on the former, but one being bent to an organisation's vision and the other interpreted on a personal level. If a devout priest discovered this plot by his own church, would his duty allow it to prRead more

    Originally it was intended as a discussion between religion and morality, the latter being being built on the former, but one being bent to an organisation’s vision and the other interpreted on a personal level. If a devout priest discovered this plot by his own church, would his duty allow it to progress or would his (religion informed) morality force him to act against his church?
    I take on board what you say regarding ‘uncovers’ and ‘discovers’, and to make it more a race against time I would have him discover the plot and then immediately being forced on the run.

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