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Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.
The Blindside: A homeless, oversized and under-educated African-American teenager is taken in by a well-to-do white family.? Notice how absolutely nothing about 'football' (a huge draw for that film) is mentioned. I recently read a script consultant's web site that said whatever you do, DO NOT let oRead more
The Blindside: A homeless, oversized and under-educated African-American teenager is taken in by a well-to-do white family.?
Notice how absolutely nothing about ‘football’ (a huge draw for that film) is mentioned. I recently read a script consultant’s web site that said whatever you do, DO NOT let on what your story is about in the loglne. H’wood only asks to read a script if they are curious as to what it is about because the logline makes it a total mystery. Then read the next script consultant’s web page and he/she says be sure to include the crux of the story and/or at least the hook and protagonist’s quest.
I know one thing. If you pick one of the choices above, someone will come along and tell you to rewrite it to the other way. Yup, that’s H’wood.
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Use "An" before a word starting with a vowel. I think you mean "life" not "live". Is English your second language?
Use “An” before a word starting with a vowel. I think you mean “life” not “live”. Is English your second language?
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This is a good example of the confusion about how much to reveal in a logline. This one is interesting, yet reveals little about the premise, inciting incidents or anything but that there are two characters solving crimes. Many script doctors would set about to try to 'fix' it with more informationRead more
This is a good example of the confusion about how much to reveal in a logline. This one is interesting, yet reveals little about the premise, inciting incidents or anything but that there are two characters solving crimes.
Many script doctors would set about to try to ‘fix’ it with more information about the storyline, while if you added that information, those same script consultants would want you to remove the additional information from the logline to make people want to read the script to find out.
So which is best…? Who knows… Either way, some will suggest the other.
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