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  1. Posted: May 25, 2012In: Public

    After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 26, 2012 at 4:00 am

    So the murdered psychopath's 'entity' (meaning spirit or ghost) is a skin harvester? Does he make lamp shades?

    So the murdered psychopath’s ‘entity’ (meaning spirit or ghost) is a skin harvester? Does he make lamp shades?

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  2. Posted: May 25, 2012In: Public

    After a twisted psychopath is murdered, an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk, and kill them to sate his revenge.

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 26, 2012 at 1:06 am

    "an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk" -- Say what? Is this about a corn borer going after genetically modified corn (GMO)? So.. the murdered guy is an entity - - a spirit or a ghost and not a corporation or department? Entities are not necessarily animate, so whyRead more

    “an evil entity targets the current lineage of those responsible to husk” — Say what?

    Is this about a corn borer going after genetically modified corn (GMO)? So.. the murdered guy is an entity – – a spirit or a ghost and not a corporation or department? Entities are not necessarily animate, so why not say what you mean? For me, this logline is way too obsfucated,

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 25, 2012 at 5:22 pm

    According to "The Chicago Manual of Style", this is the proper sentence: "Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, two cowgirls (an African-American Iraq war vet and an ex-NYC fashion model) have 72 hours to save a son from kidnappers." There is no full stop (a period) without a verb, "Taking on warrinRead more

    According to “The Chicago Manual of Style”, this is the proper sentence:

    “Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, two cowgirls (an African-American Iraq war vet and an ex-NYC fashion model) have 72 hours to save a son from kidnappers.”

    There is no full stop (a period) without a verb, “Taking on warring drug cartels” is not a sentence, it is an introductory participial phrase. This is very common, proper English grammar. Color is correctly spelled, not ‘colour’. I originally wrote ‘African-American’, but my script consultant suggested “of color” was better. So everybody’s an expert…

    The Blindside: “A homeless, oversized and under-educated African-American teenager is taken in by a well-to-do white family.”

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