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  1. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 25, 2012 at 7:57 am

    That was it -- the impression I meant to make in one sentence.

    That was it — the impression I meant to make in one sentence.

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  2. Posted: May 25, 2012In: Public

    Outside (Sitcom TV Series)

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 25, 2012 at 1:04 am

    I like it! It has great potential as a story springboard. You've given just give enough info, so the reader can make up their own script... Never mind, it's not the one you plan to write or have written.;) My oldest friend on E. 76th in NYC was agoraphobic and a bridge card reading psychic. She coulRead more

    I like it! It has great potential as a story springboard. You’ve given just give enough info, so the reader can make up their own script… Never mind, it’s not the one you plan to write or have written.;)

    My oldest friend on E. 76th in NYC was agoraphobic and a bridge card reading psychic. She could hear conversations weeks before they occurred. However next door neighbor started smelling as she was a drunk who’d died without notice… The end arc is the nursing home in Brooklyn where I send socks and babka.

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2012In: Public

    Taking on warring Texas drug cartels, a female Iraq war vet of color, a teenage hunk from the feed store, and a cattle dog, come to the aid of a neighbor who\'s son has been kidnapped.

    GXavier
    Added an answer on May 25, 2012 at 12:09 am

    The more HR I read, the more crap I see as loglines and then movies. I'm guessing like so many including H'wood, I need to be in the Indie market. Hollywood rarely makes good movies anymore, they just distribute Indies, so the people in Austin film community who told me not to bother are correct. I'Read more

    The more HR I read, the more crap I see as loglines and then movies. I’m guessing like so many including H’wood, I need to be in the Indie market. Hollywood rarely makes good movies anymore, they just distribute Indies, so the people in Austin film community who told me not to bother are correct. I’m not interested in making another Hollywood ‘snoozefest’ is so true. Many writers do buck the system as Indies because H’wood is so illogical and frankly boring.

    The next movie I’ll see will be Kathryn Bigelow’s, an Indie producer that Weinstein usually distributes. At least I’ll stay awake.

    I wrote here that the rewritten logline is getting synopsis and treatments read, so now the crux of the story, the kidnapping needs to be removed? You must be in Hollywood, SEM.

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