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A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.
Crying shame to hear a Jamaican stressed! In addition to the gaps iamlegendre mentioned, we all get stressed. Is there a stronger reason (inciting incident) for wanting to leave the life she built in the states? Currently, all I can see is: “Stressed by life in the US a Jamaican mother tween son homRead more
Crying shame to hear a Jamaican stressed!
In addition to the gaps iamlegendre mentioned, we all get stressed. Is there a stronger reason (inciting incident) for wanting to leave the life she built in the states?
Currently, all I can see is:
“Stressed by life in the US a Jamaican mother tween son homeland ”
Fill in the gaps so I can escape to Jamaica with you 😉
See lessWhen his estranged father passes away, an aimless office worker must go on a word jumble puzzle themed treasure hunt to claim his inheritance and save the family home within 48 hours
Good stuff, haven’t seen one of these in a while, makes me want to re-watch “Brewster’s Millions”. To quicken the premise, how about: “An aimless office worker has 48 hours to solve a puzzle themed treasure hunt to claim his estranged rich father’s inheritance” Take care.
Good stuff, haven’t seen one of these in a while, makes me want to re-watch “Brewster’s Millions”.
To quicken the premise, how about:
“An aimless office worker has 48 hours to solve a puzzle themed treasure hunt to claim his estranged rich father’s inheritance”
Take care.
See lessThree interwined stories between three young couples being on the run.
IvyEight6, beside the Formula link provided (header of page with format examples), I did a quick Google search and found the following that may help. Review how these were constructed and reply in the comments area with your second draft. The goal is to get this story's logline in a form for us (comRead more
IvyEight6, beside the Formula link provided (header of page with format examples), I did a quick Google search and found the following that may help. Review how these were constructed and reply in the comments area with your second draft. The goal is to get this story’s logline in a form for us (community) to consume and help.
Three disparate strangers unexpectedly meet amidst [conflict] to discover that they must work together and defeat [antagonist] before [ticking clock].
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Three interlocking stories all connected by [prop] converge to reveal [adjectives/plot description] and how [character motivations and/or principal moral or lesson].
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Three strangers find each of their woeful fates is intertwined when they unexpectedly encounter one another in their search for the higher power at the source of their misery.
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Pulp Fiction: An anthology of four different stories, told from four different perspectives, set in the crime thriving suburbs of Los Angeles.
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Pulp Fiction: The lives of two mob hitmen, a boxer, a gangster’s wife, and a pair of diner bandits intertwine in four tales of violence and redemption.
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Magnolia: An epic mosaic of interrelated characters in search of love, forgiveness, and meaning in the San Fernando Valley.
Take care.
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