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  1. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Action

    A group of filmmakers decide to make short films about robots, outer space and talking cats.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on September 9, 2020 at 9:14 am

    Karel Segers - the creator of this site [logline.it], - was a bad joke about getting more loglines to push up the counter on the top right of this site. So... can you reply with another draft based on my examples below? If not that's cool. Take care.

    Karel Segers – the creator of this site [logline.it], – was a bad joke about getting more loglines to push up the counter on the top right of this site.

    So… can you reply with another draft based on my examples below? If not that’s cool.

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Drama

    A young woman wakes up at the ‘After Life’ headquarters, only to discover that her premature death was caused by a glitch in the system. She must now convince The Boss to give her a second chance at life.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 4:17 am

    I like the idea of her Boss agreeing on one condition - she has to repeatedly die prematurely to "debug" the system.

    I like the idea of her Boss agreeing on one condition – she has to repeatedly die prematurely to “debug” the system.

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  3. Posted: September 8, 2020In: Action

    A group of filmmakers decide to make short films about robots, outer space and talking cats.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 9, 2020 at 4:07 am

    Ok… but for me to sit 90 minutes watching: First, what prompted the group to do this e.g. “To pass their LA film school final, a group…”. Second, what about adding some obstacles e.g. “…, a group of novice filmmakers must overcome their egos to create short films about robots, outer space, and talkiRead more

    Ok… but for me to sit 90 minutes watching:
    First, what prompted the group to do this e.g. “To pass their LA film school final, a group…”.
    Second, what about adding some obstacles e.g. “…, a group of novice filmmakers must overcome their egos to create short films about robots, outer space, and talking cats…”.
    Last, a teaser of some kind e.g. “… outer space, and talking cats, but things get real when one of the students reveals a love affair with their alien cat abductors”

    Take care.

    P.s. From your similar posts and responses, I hope to God “IvyEight6” is not some social engineered BOT created by Karel to drum up the logline numbers – joking, but… 😉

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