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  1. Posted: September 4, 2020In: SciFi

    A high school student must race against time to stop robots from invading her school.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on September 5, 2020 at 7:54 am

    CORRECTION (spelling) “Bullied for being a misfit a high schooler joins alike students to seek revenge against her tormentors, but when the world’s invaded by robots abducting females she must join forces to rescue her schoolmates”

    CORRECTION (spelling)

    “Bullied for being a misfit a high schooler joins alike students to seek revenge against her tormentors, but when the world’s invaded by robots abducting females she must join forces to rescue her schoolmates”

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2020In: Drama

    Desperate to hide the disgraceful events surrounding his disbarment, a young attorney is forced to consider a deranged proposition from an aging, vengeful heiress, who is hellbent on protecting her family legacy through the silencing of a local critic.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 5, 2020 at 7:48 am

    Interesting, but here is a lot of shadow hiding pertinent details for me, please elaborate on the following: 1. Is our disbarred attorney harboring a fugitive from justice – the heiress? 2. For his arc, how does the entrance of her character or the acceptance of the “proposition” get him closer to bRead more

    Interesting, but here is a lot of shadow hiding pertinent details for me, please elaborate on the following:
    1. Is our disbarred attorney harboring a fugitive from justice – the heiress?
    2. For his arc, how does the entrance of her character or the acceptance of the “proposition” get him closer to being reinstated as an attorney to be able to legally defend her?
    3. The way the logline reads her critics are active and need to be silenced, but your elaboration puts this fight in the past? Why would a disgraced attorney who has retreated to a small-town risk further damage to his name by being an accomplice? OPINION – If there was a romance between the two, that may be a driver for his actions.

    Take care.

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  3. Posted: September 4, 2020In: SciFi

    A high school student must race against time to stop robots from invading her school.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 5, 2020 at 7:04 am

    I know this is Sci-Fi but getting a Family vibe from your response, anyway, this is what I am leaning towards - took some liberties with your story, please make this your own. “Bullied for being a misfit a high schooler joins alike students to seek revenge against her tormentors, but when the world’Read more

    I know this is Sci-Fi but getting a Family vibe from your response, anyway, this is what I am leaning towards – took some liberties with your story, please make this your own.

    “Bullied for being a misfit a high schooler joins alike students to seek revenge against her tormentors, but when the world’s invaded by robots abducting females, she must join forces to recuse her schoolmates”

    I also take you’re a big fan of robots, I swear I was dreaming about robots last night 😊 get out of my head!

    Take care.

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