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After his wife was murdered, a police officer must hold the bikers responsible with the help of his daughter who is a cyborg.
Interesting, getting a RoboCops Daughter vibe. You need a clearer connection to this cyborg thang, that hit me out of leftfield. I can “see” this guy’s wife getting murdered and instead of going for his gun, he reluctantly turns on a killing machine - his cyborg daughter and says Sic ‘em! lol. A couRead more
Interesting, getting a RoboCops Daughter vibe.
You need a clearer connection to this cyborg thang, that hit me out of leftfield. I can “see” this guy’s wife getting murdered and instead of going for his gun, he reluctantly turns on a killing machine – his cyborg daughter and says Sic ‘em! lol.
A couple of questions, please.
1. Where is this set, in the near future?
3. Who is this police officer? Does he have access to cyborg tech? looking for how his daughter was built/modified.
4. If HE has to hold them responsible, there must have been a miss in the justice system? How did the bikers escape justice?
Take care.
See lessAn American police officer teams up with a Japanese convicted felon to take down a drug lord who set them up in a drug deal gone wrong.
1. Added a location. 2. Removed the second reference to “drug” – inferred. Q: “deal gone wrong”, I get it, but is there something unique about this deal? Was the Cop’s partner killed? Something like that to spice this up 😉 "An American police officer teams up with a Japanese convicted felon to takeRead more
1. Added a location.
2. Removed the second reference to “drug” – inferred.
Q: “deal gone wrong”, I get it, but is there something unique about this deal? Was the Cop’s partner killed? Something like that to spice this up 😉
“An American police officer teams up with a Japanese convicted felon to take down a Tokyo drug lord who set them up in a deal gone wrong”
See lessA christian struggles with his fate when his new neighbours are satanists, this is how he discovers he is actually the devil himself. “668 the neighbour of the beast”
Good stuff brother, dig the title. I added some focus to your protag and wonder. “A reverend begins to question his fate when his new Satanist neighbors are hell-bent on proving he’s their messiah”
Good stuff brother, dig the title.
I added some focus to your protag and wonder.
“A reverend begins to question his fate when his new Satanist neighbors are hell-bent on proving he’s their messiah”
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