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  1. Posted: September 4, 2020In: SciFi

    A high school student must race against time to stop robots from invading her school.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 4, 2020 at 8:02 am

    Think about the following while sharpening this logline. 1. What kind of world is this story set in? 2. Who is this high school girl? She must have something going for her if SHE is the one to stop a robot invasion. 3. Why NOW must she race against time? What is the leading factor to push this catalRead more

    Think about the following while sharpening this logline.
    1. What kind of world is this story set in?
    2. Who is this high school girl? She must have something going for her if SHE is the one to stop a robot invasion.
    3. Why NOW must she race against time? What is the leading factor to push this catalyst?
    4. What do these robots want from her or the school? What is so special about them as targets?

    I or the community can take a crack at this if you add your responses.
    Take care.

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  2. Posted: September 3, 2020In: Romance

    When a newly arrived Papuan girl falls for a spoilt young man with a fatal illness she convinces him to escape his fiancé and allow her Medicine man grandfather to heal him and have him accepted by her people.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on September 4, 2020 at 4:58 am

    Big D here - aka “Dallas, Texas USA” when I hear “spoilt” I think of chunky milk :) so I'll take it this young man is wealthy. I tried to stick to your core (from what I can glean from your OP) when constructing the logline. You can save the other obstacles e.g. arranged to be married, tribal politiRead more

    Big D here – aka “Dallas, Texas USA” when I hear “spoilt” I think of chunky milk 🙂 so I’ll take it this young man is wealthy.

    I tried to stick to your core (from what I can glean from your OP) when constructing the logline. You can save the other obstacles e.g. arranged to be married, tribal politics, acceptance, and rejection as ingredients for your ACTs.

    “A Papuan girl falls for a wealthy boy from a rival tribe, but when she discovers he’s terminally ill they embark on a quest to be healed by her medicine man grandfather”

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  3. Posted: September 2, 2020In: Action

    After his wife was murdered, a police officer must hold the bikers responsible with the help of his daughter who is a cyborg.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on September 2, 2020 at 4:46 pm

    Thanks for the elaboration, this is what I was able to glean. "Set in a dystopic future, a drug-addled policeman and his cyborg daughter exact revenge on the biker gang that covered up the brutal murder of his wife" The story sounds b a d a s s ;) take care.

    Thanks for the elaboration, this is what I was able to glean.

    “Set in a dystopic future, a drug-addled policeman and his cyborg daughter exact revenge on the biker gang that covered up the brutal murder of his wife”

    The story sounds b a d a s s 😉 take care.

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