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  1. Posted: May 3, 2020In: Drama

    Losing his eyesight gradually due to a rare disease, an introverted painter hurries to finish his last painting to participate in an important exhibition going trough an existential crisis.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 4, 2020 at 5:32 am

    Agree with Mr. Pedley, the existential crisis stuff is a black hole and the overall plot is tired. How about: An unadventurous artist must rediscover a life worth living to complete a final masterpiece for a prestigious exhibition before the loss of his eyesight to a rare disease.

    Agree with Mr. Pedley, the existential crisis stuff is a black hole and the overall plot is tired.

    How about:

    An unadventurous artist must rediscover a life worth living to complete a final masterpiece for a prestigious exhibition before the loss of his eyesight to a rare disease.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2020In: Romance

    When a bad boy movie star agrees to a blind date, he ends up with his biggest fan – a struggling single mom, whom he falls for.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2020 at 4:48 am

    Can Jason Statham fall for a single mom? Sure, but I feel we are getting sucked into the Hallmark channel??. Breaking it down: Why now? Why are these two different worlds together? How about she wins a meet & greet contest with said bad boy movie star Who is she? She is a chill single mom Yoga iRead more

    Can Jason Statham fall for a single mom? Sure, but I feel we are getting sucked into the Hallmark channel??.

    Breaking it down:

    • Why now? Why are these two different worlds together? How about she wins a meet & greet contest with said bad boy movie star
    • Who is she? She is a chill single mom Yoga instructor
    • Where is the rub/conflict? He botches the meet and greets

    After botching a meet and greet with his biggest fan ? a single mom Yogi, a bad boy movie star must turn his hectic life around to find inner peace and true love.

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  3. Posted: April 22, 2020In: Coming of Age

    When a terminally ill student wants to commit suicide, he meets an enigmatic girl who gives him new courage to face life, only to find out that her life expectancy is lower than his.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 26, 2020 at 7:37 am

    When I see the wording ?suicidal terminally ill student? my gut reaction, although harsh was - why bother? Why should I bother to invest any emotions in a lead who is physically/emotionally dead already? Not knowing your story, I came up with some stuff to allow me to care ? ?A suicidal terminally iRead more

    When I see the wording ?suicidal terminally ill student? my gut reaction, although harsh was – why bother? Why should I bother to invest any emotions in a lead who is physically/emotionally dead already?

    Not knowing your story, I came up with some stuff to allow me to care ?

    • ?A suicidal terminally ill student finds hope? to ?A terminally ill student on the verge of committing suicide finds hope?.
    • ?after falling for an enigmatic girl? to the epitome of upbeat ? how about falling for a cheerleader? He is a student, right?
    • I do not believe you need to state ?who gives him new courage to face life? ? the word hope is universal for someone in his state. Plus, losing that will free up space for some hopes dashed stuff mentioned by CraigDGriffiths.

    With the help of a cheerleader, a terminally ill student on the verge of committing suicide finds inspiration but hopes are dashed when he discovers her life expectancy is shorter than his.

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