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  1. Posted: May 14, 2020In: Thriller

    It’s 2151 and a bio scientist finds herself in the middle of the largest coverup in history. She begins a race against time to expose her former CEO?s deceit or else mankind changes forever.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 16, 2020 at 6:50 am

    After reading your response here is my take: Protagonist: A bioscientist. Goal: Expose her companies deadly engineered humans coverup. Antagonist: Bad company. Stakes: Mankind ruled by the companies engineered humans.   In 2151 a cornered bioscientist must expose her companies deadly coverup toRead more

    After reading your response here is my take:
    Protagonist: A bioscientist.
    Goal: Expose her companies deadly engineered humans coverup.
    Antagonist: Bad company.
    Stakes: Mankind ruled by the companies engineered humans.

     

    In 2151 a cornered bioscientist must expose her companies deadly coverup to control the government using engineered humans before society is changed forever.

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2020In: Comedy

    A down-on-his-luck videographer breaks his estranged mother out of prison to steal the grand prize from a filthy rich YouTuber – a million-dollar Bitcoin.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 16, 2020 at 5:16 am

    Based on the input thus far, this is where I am now with the logline: A bankrupt cameraman breaks his estranged master thief mother out of prison to steal the grand prize from a filthy rich YouTuber ? a million-dollar Bitcoin. OR Should I change "master thief " to something completely ridiculous - lRead more

    Based on the input thus far, this is where I am now with the logline:

    A bankrupt cameraman breaks his estranged master thief mother out of prison to steal the grand prize from a filthy rich YouTuber ? a million-dollar Bitcoin.

    OR

    Should I change “master thief ” to something completely ridiculous – like pickpocketing? Breaking out mom because she has master thief skills to steal makes sense but not funny, him breaking out mom because she stole some wallets and he thinks that’s enough to pull this heist off is funny.

    A bankrupt cameraman breaks his estranged pickpocketing mother out of prison to steal the grand prize from a filthy rich YouTuber ? a million-dollar Bitcoin.

    Suggestions are welcome, I would love to get a laugh out of the logline.

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  3. Posted: May 8, 2020In: Drama

    When a suicidal FBI agent is assigned to infiltrate a prison drug ring, his life is saved by two lifers and a bond forms, however, his new friendships soon thwart his mission.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 14, 2020 at 6:30 am

    What if: Instead of suicidal ? the FBI agent was a powder keg or loose cannon? Like Mel Gibson's character in ?Lethal Weapon?. He is known in the agency as the only one who can pull this off. I have not seen crazy cop in a while and miss it ? The reason why he is crazy? He is hooked on ?super buff?Read more

    What if:

    Instead of suicidal ? the FBI agent was a powder keg or loose cannon? Like Mel Gibson’s character in ?Lethal Weapon?. He is known in the agency as the only one who can pull this off. I have not seen crazy cop in a while and miss it ?

    The reason why he is crazy? He is hooked on ?super buff? or whatever name you want to call the drug this ring is pushing. So, I reversed your plot, he is infiltrating to take control of the US operations for this drug, a bond is still formed with the two lifers – but they are there to stop him.

    Take care.

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