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  1. Posted: November 23, 2021In: Drama

    A man uses self hypnosis to travel back in time by uses a portrait of a pop singer who’s young enough to be his daughter to meet and fall in love with her.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 25, 2021 at 12:53 am

    Leaning towards: “An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…” You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.

    Leaning towards:
    “An obsessed fan of bygone pop star uses self-hypnosis to travel back in time, but…”
    You need a complication, finish with “but” with your plot points.

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  2. Posted: November 20, 2021In: Superhero

    When a future millionaire obsessed with time travel sets in motion his evil plan to achieve it, a high school boy with superpowers tries to stop the future catastrophe.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 23, 2021 at 11:44 pm

    Welcome! Workshopping a bit; Google these concepts if unfamiliar. What is your theme? What message are you “speedymax” trying to convey with this feature/short? What world needs this message? [worldbuilding] What is your baddie’s goal? A megalomaniac [evil] billionaire would bring your premise intoRead more

    Welcome!

    Workshopping a bit; Google these concepts if unfamiliar.
    What is your theme? What message are you “speedymax” trying to convey with this feature/short?
    What world needs this message? [worldbuilding]
    What is your baddie’s goal?
    A megalomaniac [evil] billionaire would bring your premise into the plausible realm concerning the resources to achieve time travel.
    As Yoda “Star Wars” stated, “Do or do not. There is no try.” Your Hero – must.
    Concerning your superhero, who is he? Is there an origin story to his powers? E.g., Super-Soldier serum = Captain America.

    Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

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  3. Posted: November 19, 2021In: Horror

    A group of filmmakers decide to short films about cursed objects.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on November 20, 2021 at 1:23 am

    Ok, are they student filmmakers that bite off more than they can chew when making a film about cursed objects for their final? You get the idea.

    Ok, are they student filmmakers that bite off more than they can chew when making a film about cursed objects for their final? You get the idea.

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