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  1. Posted: May 13, 2021In: Examples

    As violence and corruption ensues in the underbelly of Lagos, two brothers are divided and forced to reckon with their choices as they fight to escape a life of abject poverty.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 15, 2021 at 7:07 am

    Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well. “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …” FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader. Take care.

    Nice example, and since set in the 80’s you can add a world builder then go from there as well.
    “Set in Nigeria during the 1980’s oil boom, …”
    FYI: Choose Genre “Examples” to better orientate the reader.

    Take care.

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  2. Posted: May 13, 2021In: Sports

    After years of pent-up anger, a reckless young offender is pushed into the world of boxing and excels anyone’s expectations, but to become a true champion she must face the demons in her past.

    Odie Samurai
    Replied to answer on May 14, 2021 at 11:51 am

    Opinion: Since your protag is an “offender” we can assume flaws like being reckless. With “Rise Above” being a boxing thang how about “When finding a home in women’s boxing, a rising young offender …” you get the idea 😊

    Opinion: Since your protag is an “offender” we can assume flaws like being reckless. With “Rise Above” being a boxing thang how about “When finding a home in women’s boxing, a rising young offender …” you get the idea 😊

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  3. Posted: May 13, 2021In: Sports

    After years of pent-up anger, a reckless young offender is pushed into the world of boxing and excels anyone’s expectations, but to become a true champion she must face the demons in her past.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 13, 2021 at 2:09 am

    Leaning towards: When finding a home in women's boxing, a reckless young offender must confront her released ex-con father in order to become a true champion. Other keywords that came to mind: Rematch (with her father) and TKO trauma. Take care.

    Leaning towards:
    When finding a home in women’s boxing, a reckless young offender must confront her released ex-con father in order to become a true champion.

    Other keywords that came to mind: Rematch (with her father) and TKO trauma.

    Take care.

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