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(REVISED) When the newly appointed Sheriff of Sweetwater on a colony of Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends must defend it from a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

June 24, 2026
(REVISED.) When the reluctant Sheriff of Sweetwater on a colony of Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town he loves from a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

June 12, 2026
When the Sheriff of Sweetwater, Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town from destruction by a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

June 3, 2026

on (REVISED.) When the reluctant Sheriff of Sweetwater on a colony of Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town he loves from a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

Reluctant to be sheriff and yeah, that needs to be clarified.
on (REVISED.) When the reluctant Sheriff of Sweetwater on a colony of Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town he loves from a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

FWIW, I designed the script to be the cheapest version of the story. The city is domed so it's all soundstages with full control. And the exterior shots are at the barest minimum. It''ll cost but not as much as…
on When the Sheriff of Sweetwater, Mars stumbles on a plan to destroy the town to make room for an illegal worm farm, he and his friends have to defend the town from destruction by a megalomaniac Soybean Magnate.

In the world of the film, any transport of animals to any colony is forbidden. While not said explicitly in the script, it's to prevent the spread of infectious disease.
on When his beloved community website suddenly disappears, a stubborn story scientist must fight bureaucracy and greedy corporations to regain control of his domain and bring the site back to life.

I'm not sure most people know what a story scientist is. (I sure don't.) You might want to either cut the word story or find a way to very quickly define the term.

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