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A determined boy separated from his newfound sweetheart must cross the Bass Strait and come to the rescue before Tasmania is destroyed by rising sea levels.
Does it matter that in the film the boy only thinks that Tasmania is about to be destroyed by rising sea levels. Tasmania is not actually about to be destroyed.
Does it matter that in the film the boy only thinks that Tasmania is about to be destroyed by rising sea levels. Tasmania is not actually about to be destroyed.
See lessA determined boy separated from his newfound sweetheart must cross the Bass Strait and come to the rescue before Tasmania is destroyed by rising sea levels.
YAY!... The boy is about eight years old, as is the girl. B8C- The hero's flaw (eg fear of water), I assume, wouldn't go in the logline, but is something I cld add to the story.
YAY!… The boy is about eight years old, as is the girl. B8C- The hero’s flaw (eg fear of water), I assume, wouldn’t go in the logline, but is something I cld add to the story.
See lessAn independent twenty-something woman buys her first house, only to have her father show up on her doorstep announcing that he's left her mother and is moving in.
Sounds like a nice conflicting dynamic to start a series with! Perhaps: 'an independent young woman'? The term 'twenty- something' is a bit undecided. I'm not entirely sure if my next comment relates - being a series, but there is no end point to the logline. What must the woman do to stop him movinRead more
Sounds like a nice conflicting dynamic to start a series with!
Perhaps: ‘an independent young woman’? The term ‘twenty- something’ is a bit undecided.
I’m not entirely sure if my next comment relates – being a series, but there is no end point to the logline. What must the woman do to stop him moving in/ or to get on living together? There is a beautiful dynamic between characters, but no clear goal of what she has to do as a result of the main event (father announcing he’s moving in), which is what loglines usually do- I think- unless different for a series.
Hope this helps. All the best with it!
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