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  1. Posted: June 26, 2013In: Public

    Determined and short of money, a young boy aims to swim and fly to his dream paradise on the wildest island of Tasmania.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on June 28, 2013 at 10:01 am

    dpg- sorry can you clarify- which comment are you referring to? Thanks

    dpg- sorry can you clarify- which comment are you referring to? Thanks

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2013In: Public

    When a young boy concludes rising sea levels will sink his dream island Tasmania, he must engage all strength to swim and fly to his paradise before time runs out.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on June 28, 2013 at 9:56 am

    I don't know. What do other people think? As long as a character fully believes in what they have to do, the audience will too, or so I have heard. The boy truly believes Tasmania is about to sink after watching a class presentation regarding global warming of other kids sinking a map of the world.Read more

    I don’t know. What do other people think?

    As long as a character fully believes in what they have to do, the audience will too, or so I have heard.

    The boy truly believes Tasmania is about to sink after watching a class presentation regarding global warming of other kids sinking a map of the world. His irrational thinking is also apparent when flying off the roof and attempt swimming 429 kms across sea at night.

    I chose global warming because it is something which fits within the irrational/ comedic style of the film. More serious, logical explanations may dampen this effect.

    Feel free to disagree however…

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2013In: Public

    Determined and short of money, a young boy aims to swim and fly to his dream paradise on the wildest island of Tasmania.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on June 27, 2013 at 9:37 pm

    I see what you mean. Thank you for your comment. It has made me think. I wonder though it may be a different film & is not essential to my intention, which is to advertise Tasmania. The Spirit of Tasmania is a fairly central theme- his flying attempt aims to land him on the Spirit. He will alsoRead more

    I see what you mean. Thank you for your comment. It has made me think. I wonder though it may be a different film & is not essential to my intention, which is to advertise Tasmania. The Spirit of Tasmania is a fairly central theme- his flying attempt aims to land him on the Spirit. He will also attempt lassoing the Spirit of Tasmania from the wharf. This therefore does insinuate he’s from Melbourne.

    On a global level, where the Spirit of Tasmania may not be known, I think viewers will place the boy wherever they imagine the Spirit would leave from- potentially anywhere in the world. I don’t know if this is a far stretch…

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