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  1. Posted: July 3, 2013In: Public

    After reading a page from a spell book an incorrigible boy discovers a cursed princess trapped in a tree in his backyard. He must break the spell and save his father from his new girlfriend, the Witch.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 12:39 pm

    Awesome story! Great structure, very amusing, action packed. I want to see this film! Just tiny things- it'll be easier to read as one sentence and... Don't know how set you are on the adjective problematic. IMO, a problematic boy would be unlikely to rescue a princess up a tree. He would rather enjRead more

    Awesome story! Great structure, very amusing, action packed. I want to see this film! Just tiny things- it’ll be easier to read as one sentence and…

    Don’t know how set you are on the adjective problematic. IMO, a problematic boy would be unlikely to rescue a princess up a tree. He would rather enjoy being the bully, eg putting the princess up in the tree in the first place. A different adjective would fix this though.
    All the best!

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2013In: Public

    Determined and short of money, a young boy aims to swim and fly to his dream paradise on the wildest island of Tasmania.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 11:26 am

    Why is almost every comment here marked with negative points? I am quite confused why nobody seems to agree with anything above?

    Why is almost every comment here marked with negative points? I am quite confused why nobody seems to agree with anything above?

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2013In: Public

    When a young boy concludes rising sea levels will sink his dream island Tasmania, he must engage all strength to swim and fly to his paradise before time runs out.

    isabelle.allen
    Added an answer on June 29, 2013 at 12:14 pm

    Is this the general consensus... The rising sea levels about to sink Tasmania is acceptable as the boy's fear, used to increase the stakes, but is not his main motivation for wanting to get there.

    Is this the general consensus… The rising sea levels about to sink Tasmania is acceptable as the boy’s fear, used to increase the stakes, but is not his main motivation for wanting to get there.

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