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  1. Posted: February 13, 2013In: Public

    Logline:While investigating a series of disappearances in a rural Indiana town, tabloid journalist David Cross discovers a mysterious mansion in the woods, guarded by a division of the NSA known only as ?secret ops.? After being discovered at the military camp, he meets secret ops scientist and fan, Leonardo Valdez who helps him escape, but there is only one place to go, and after entering the mansion?.there?s no way back.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2013 at 6:08 am

    Too long mate. Its a synopsis most likely. Your target is 25-30 words. Disappearances of ? Domestic cattle? Pets? People? NSA known only as secret ops I would cut to one word: mercenaries. While journalist investigates series of human abductions, he crosses a mercenary camp protecting mysterious manRead more

    Too long mate. Its a synopsis most likely.

    Your target is 25-30 words.

    Disappearances of ? Domestic cattle? Pets? People?

    NSA known only as secret ops I would cut to one word: mercenaries.

    While journalist investigates series of human abductions, he crosses a mercenary camp protecting mysterious mansion and hides inside – to fight for his life with ghosts/zombies/werevolves/angry postmen ….

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  2. Posted: February 11, 2013In: Public

    While fighting with a group of survivors against deadly man-eating monsters inside the underground laboratory, Rita is trying to find her missing brother. Version 2

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    Added an answer on February 12, 2013 at 12:18 am

    Thank you guys, great advice! Applying what Geno said, what about this? When trapped in an underground lab, a young traumatized woman fights man-eating monsters while searching for her bio-toxicologist brother who is somehow involved in all the chaos.

    Thank you guys, great advice!

    Applying what Geno said, what about this?

    When trapped in an underground lab, a young traumatized woman fights man-eating monsters while searching for her bio-toxicologist brother who is somehow involved in all the chaos.

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  3. Posted: February 10, 2013In: Public

    Naive teenage girl was preparing for her wedding in medieval village until it was spoiled by an evil witch's curse. To prevent villagers from eating each other (literally) she must confront the witch and learn the truth about the village past.

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    Added an answer on February 11, 2013 at 6:23 am

    Thanx guys, with your feedback im getting closer -;) and yes its auppose to be fairytale -;)

    Thanx guys, with your feedback im getting closer -;) and yes its auppose to be fairytale -;)

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