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As a lifeguard struggles to cope with his wife's suicide, his emotions are at breaking point when the rapist responsible for her sorrow pleads for help.
Intriguing! But I do think "pleads for help" is perhaps a bit too vague. I assume he pleads for help from the lifeguard, but how? Can you find some way of saying this that is more intriguing, without giving too much away? Also, "his emotions are at breaking point" reads a bit cliched.
Intriguing! But I do think “pleads for help” is perhaps a bit too vague. I assume he pleads for help from the lifeguard, but how? Can you find some way of saying this that is more intriguing, without giving too much away? Also, “his emotions are at breaking point” reads a bit cliched.
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