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  1. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Noir

    Investigating a series of sadistic crimes, a shady Inspector must protect the only survivor and thwart the machination of a sadomasochistic duo to prove his innocence.

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    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 7:36 pm

    Than you Nir, you're right about the reading. Actually, this "troubled" but efficient inspector is known for being a bit?too much fascinated by sadomasochistic games, and suspected to have some practice. When he comes too close to the duo he is investigating about, they compromise him and make him sRead more

    Than you Nir, you’re right about the reading.
    Actually, this “troubled” but efficient inspector is known for being a bit?too much fascinated by sadomasochistic games, and suspected to have some practice. When he comes too close to the duo he is investigating about, they compromise him and make him suspected of being the author of the next crimes. so everything is about the A story.

    Maybe the following logline would be better?
    “Investigating a series of sadistic crimes, a shady Inspector must protect the only survivor and thwart the machination of a sadomasochistic duo to prove his innocence.”

    It seems like “sleazy” or “shady” or “fishy” sense is too strong, unless the French translation “louche” doesn’t mean exactly the same thing: there is only a doubt about his sex morality. He frequents ?SM world and/as this is his investigating spesialism.? he is suspected to like and maybe pratice “light” SM games, but not to be violent or dangerous.

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2015In: SciFi

    When their last mission fails, three neurotic hit-men from three different times and civilizations are separately enlisted by a highly secretive organization to assassinate each other.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 6:53 am

    N.B. : ?The original logline is by ?Roger Avary (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roger_Avary?,?http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000812/?ref_=nv_sr_1?)

    N.B. : ?The original logline is by ?Roger Avary (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Roger_Avary?,?http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000812/?ref_=nv_sr_1?)

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  3. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Drama

    A corrupt detective with one month left to live tries to make all the wrongs right in a wobbly road to redemption, becoming the cop ? and the person ? he always wanted to be in the process.

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    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on September 29, 2015 at 6:45 am

    Interesting. This original logline is by Sheldon Turner (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sheldon_Turner,?http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1417242/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1?)

    Interesting.

    This original logline is by Sheldon Turner (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sheldon_Turner,?http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1417242/?ref_=fn_al_nm_1?)

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