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  1. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Drama

    After a peculiar foreigner buys back her freedom from the king of Jericho, a desperate young prostitute tries to free her enslaved family before the fabled city is destroyed by an Israelite army.

    Jean-Marie Mazaleyrat Logliner
    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 1:00 am

    Thank you Karel, After a peculiar?foreigner?buys back her freedom from the king of Jericho, a?desperate young prostitute tries to free her enslaved family before the fabled city is destroyed by an Israelite army.

    Thank you Karel,

    After a peculiar?foreigner?buys back her freedom from the king of Jericho, a?desperate young prostitute tries to free her enslaved family before the fabled city is destroyed by an Israelite army.

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  2. Posted: September 28, 2015In: Horror

    A self confident hitman relives along a nightmarish night the killing of his last victim.

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 3:18 am

    Hello FFF,I thought that ?-"reality" - ?would means something more subjective than -?reality - mostly if placed after - nightmarish?- . However, ?"reality" is not in the logline.I don't understand ?why you "don?t understand what you mean by ?relives?", as you give the best definition of this:??To unRead more

    Hello FFF,

    I thought that ?-“reality” – ?would means something more subjective than –?reality – mostly if placed after – nightmarish?- . However, ?”reality” is not in the logline.

    I don’t understand ?why you “don?t understand what you mean by ?relives?“, as you give the best definition of this:??To undergo or experience again, especially in the imagination?. I thought this were clear enough.

    Who’s the antagonist? maybe himself, maybe the story (“the plot is a conspiracy against the hero”), maybe something else…

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  3. Posted: September 29, 2015In: Drama

    When a survivor of a train crash disrupts her life, a young woman must overcome her circle?s hostility and cope with the abortion she denied for ten years

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    Added an answer on September 30, 2015 at 2:35 am

    Hahaha FFF, Don't worry about?the script. It's written and it already won some awards. I'm still polishing it while trying to sell it. Howhever, as English is not my native language, i may have some difficulties for finding the best sentence?sometimes... You're right about the catalyzer, but he's noRead more

    Hahaha FFF,

    Don’t worry about?the script. It’s written and it already won some awards. I’m still polishing it while trying to sell it.

    Howhever, as English is not my native language, i may have some difficulties for finding the best sentence?sometimes…

    You’re right about the catalyzer, but he’s not the train engineer. Please read my comment to Priggy above.

    :o)

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