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  1. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    When a fed-up woman is fired by her sexist boss, she start an all-female gang to make a robbery at her boss? best client disguised as Islamic veiled women, only to find that Islamophobics and Islamist make the plan much harder.

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    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 5:46 am

    I would drop the islamic stuff. IMO there is no producer who would accept this in a script nowadays: not pollitically correct. "When fired by her?sexist boss,?a fed-up woman starts a female gang to make a robbery at his?best client, ..."

    I would drop the islamic stuff. IMO there is no producer who would accept this in a script nowadays: not pollitically correct.

    “When fired by her?sexist boss,?a fed-up woman starts a female gang to make a robbery at his?best client, …”

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  2. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.

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    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 5:26 am

    "When a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI to save their lab, they need to pass a series of tests while unscrupulous corporations try to lay hand on the invention."The obstacles are?the series of test and the tentatives of the companies to lay hand on the AI. The laRead more

    “When a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI to save their lab, they need to pass a series of tests while unscrupulous corporations try to lay hand on the invention.”

    The obstacles are?the series of test and the tentatives of the companies to lay hand on the AI. The lack of funds is a premise: maybe the reason why the lab must be closed, and/or the reason why they cannot build a real AI.
    The antagonists are the companies, better if collusion with the responsable of the tests.
    What’s at stake is the lab.
    Better if the nerdy intern is a pretty woman so there may be a love affair with the responsable of the tests or some boss of the companies.

    The usual?ending of such a plot is the?tests missed, the?companies conned and the scientist having lot of money to build his real AI. This can make?a good comedy.

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on October 1, 2015 at 4:44 am

    When dropped by her agent, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where a perverse guru makes screenwriters die like their characters?until only the best one survive.This?seems to be ?close to Cube,?etc.

    When dropped by her agent, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where a perverse guru makes screenwriters die like their characters?until only the best one survive.

    This?seems to be ?close to Cube,?etc.

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