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  1. Posted: April 10, 2019In: Examples

    A Jewish-Hungarian concentration camp prisoner struggles to give a body he believes to be his illegitimate son a proper Jewish burial.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 10:46 pm

    My question is: is this a movie? Or is this a few scenes for a larger movie about survival, hope, perseverance and faith? Can you clarify WHY he wants to give his illegitimate son a proper Jewish burial? What is his motivation? And what are the stakes if he doesn't succeed?

    My question is: is this a movie? Or is this a few scenes for a larger movie about survival, hope, perseverance and faith?

    Can you clarify WHY he wants to give his illegitimate son a proper Jewish burial? What is his motivation? And what are the stakes if he doesn’t succeed?

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  2. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Drama

    An alcoholic soldier must face his abusive father and confront his own addictions before he loses his memory.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 10:31 pm

    Thank you all so much for helping me workshop this. It's the toughest logline I've had to write b/c the story is more cerebral than concept-oriented.? You guys are asking all the right questions and helping me dig into the best way to construct this beast.

    Thank you all so much for helping me workshop this. It’s the toughest logline I’ve had to write b/c the story is more cerebral than concept-oriented.? You guys are asking all the right questions and helping me dig into the best way to construct this beast.

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  3. Posted: April 28, 2019In: Drama

    An alcoholic soldier must face his abusive father and confront his own addictions before he loses his memory.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2019 at 10:18 am

    Goal is to overcome a family history of alcohol addiction and patriarchal abuse (verbal, physical, emotional). Memory loss comes from lithium treatments for PTSD, part of mandated treatment after returning from Afghanistan. So maybe a different approach would be: "After returning from the war in AfgRead more

    Goal is to overcome a family history of alcohol addiction and patriarchal abuse (verbal, physical, emotional). Memory loss comes from lithium treatments for PTSD, part of mandated treatment after returning from Afghanistan.

    So maybe a different approach would be:

    “After returning from the war in Afghanistan, an alcoholic soldier seeks to redress past family addictions and his father’s abuses but must find answers and redemption before losing his memories to drugs designed to treat PTSD.”

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