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  1. Posted: April 4, 2015In: Public

    Me, Myself & Irene meets Death Defying Acts – "When two young illusionists with multiple personality disorder start dating, they must figure out ?who? will date ?whom’; so their love lives will not self-destruct."

    Joel Goodman
    Added an answer on April 4, 2015 at 8:29 pm

    Not necessarily two themes, but two devices. Two things, each of which require us to suspend our disbelief and just 'accept'. So one of them has a strange multiple-personality-disorder which they have the ability to consciously control. (Ok, I can accept that).... and he meets someone else who happeRead more

    Not necessarily two themes, but two devices. Two things, each of which require us to suspend our disbelief and just ‘accept’. So one of them has a strange multiple-personality-disorder which they have the ability to consciously control. (Ok, I can accept that)…. and he meets someone else who happens to have the same strange condition… (mmmm a bit weird and ‘strangely convenient’)… and that person has exactly the same obscure profession Illusionist…. (now I’m feeling quite stretched for credulity)… Thats what I meant by ‘double mumbo-jumbo’ in this case.

    look, perhaps you can make it work, but personally, I found “Me, myself and Irene” to be a bit annoying and difficult to ‘suspend my disbelief’… now you’re suggesting a plot which “doubles-down” on that film’s worst characteristic (I.M.O), the exaggerated multiple personality disorder, , and expands on it further by making it controllable. Just my 2c.

    Good luck with it all anyway!

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2015In: Public

    When a government agent is sent to work on a new naval submarine, she discoveres that her ex-husband is out to kill her.

    Joel Goodman
    Added an answer on April 4, 2015 at 6:05 pm

    It may also be backwards in its wording. This logline suggests that he was trying to kill her first, and she discovers this fact because she goes to work on the submarine.

    It may also be backwards in its wording. This logline suggests that he was trying to kill her first, and she discovers this fact because she goes to work on the submarine.

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2015In: Public

    Me, Myself & Irene meets Death Defying Acts – "When two young illusionists with multiple personality disorder start dating, they must figure out ?who? will date ?whom’; so their love lives will not self-destruct."

    Joel Goodman
    Added an answer on April 4, 2015 at 1:29 pm

    I agree with Richiev. It sounds like it may be quite 'convoluted', that two Illusionists, both with the same unusually (unrealistic) mental condition, which they can consciously control, happen to be working together and attracted to each other in this way. It's straying towards Blake Snyder's - "DoRead more

    I agree with Richiev. It sounds like it may be quite ‘convoluted’, that two Illusionists, both with the same unusually (unrealistic) mental condition, which they can consciously control, happen to be working together and attracted to each other in this way. It’s straying towards Blake Snyder’s – “Double Mumbo-jumbo” pitfall, and the audience may find it hard to connect with the concept and suspend their disbelief.

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