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A hedonistic, white american jock at a small Florida college accidentally falls in love with the guarded, over-studious black Bahamian girl in his English class after he and his clique are forced to lodge with her and her family during their spring break trip to The Bahamas.
I'm guessing you're alluding to the fact that he (and his clique) are racially prejudiced, which, if stated would certainly add to the irony of his predicament. Why / how is he 'forced' to stay with her family? Is it a punishment? Is he stranded? How does someone 'accidentally' fall in love? Is he aRead more
I’m guessing you’re alluding to the fact that he (and his clique) are racially prejudiced, which, if stated would certainly add to the irony of his predicament.
Why / how is he ‘forced’ to stay with her family? Is it a punishment? Is he stranded?
How does someone ‘accidentally’ fall in love? Is he actively trying to dislike her?
What is his goal? What is at stake?
good luck
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"An unassuming young intellectual must face off with the 19th Century's greatest criminal Kingpin to rescue his childhood sweetheart from a life of sexual servitude and topple the criminal conspiracy which may lead all the way to the Royal Family"
“An unassuming young intellectual must face off with the 19th Century’s greatest criminal Kingpin to rescue his childhood sweetheart from a life of sexual servitude and topple the criminal conspiracy which may lead all the way to the Royal Family”
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I think you might need a lot more detail in there. What kind of teen? what kind of bad past? What kind of 'new life'? How is he being held back? Where is it set? When is it set? Is there some 'irony' in his plight which you can define in there? I can't tell from this whether its a comedy, or a dramaRead more
I think you might need a lot more detail in there. What kind of teen? what kind of bad past? What kind of ‘new life’? How is he being held back? Where is it set? When is it set? Is there some ‘irony’ in his plight which you can define in there?
I can’t tell from this whether its a comedy, or a drama. At the moment, due to the logline’s generic nature, this could literally refer to Harry Potter (his bad past with Voldamort keeps interfering with his new peaceful life as a wizard).
good luck!
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