1. Posted: October 23, 2017In:

    After a decade of hunting terrorists. Liam?s new icy adventure to restore an abandoned ski lodge ends up with his former Special forces team having to adapt to being the hunted when they cross paths with a legendary creature known for its winter scream.

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    Just out of retirement, a team of special forces awakens a legendary creature as they attempt to restore an abandonned ski lodge. They will have to get back into their old habits as they are hunted one by one. This could be a good horror comedy.

    Just out of retirement, a team of special forces awakens a legendary creature as they attempt to restore an abandonned ski lodge. They will have to get back into their old habits as they are hunted one by one.

    This could be a good horror comedy.

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  2. Posted: June 2, 2017In:

    Reword: Imprisoned in an apartment with a complete stranger, a humanitarian twenty-something has to a find a way to save the world and its population before her abductors? plan unfolds.

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    I made a new logline for it: https://loglines.org/logline/reword-2-when-she-is-abducted-by-her-estranged-father-so-she-can-be-spared-a-stubborn-humanitarian-must-find-a-way-to-prevent-him-from-killing-most-of-humanity/

    I made a new logline for it:
    https://loglines.org/logline/reword-2-when-she-is-abducted-by-her-estranged-father-so-she-can-be-spared-a-stubborn-humanitarian-must-find-a-way-to-prevent-him-from-killing-most-of-humanity/

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  3. Posted: June 2, 2017In:

    Reword: Imprisoned in an apartment with a complete stranger, a humanitarian twenty-something has to a find a way to save the world and its population before her abductors? plan unfolds.

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    Thank you for the advice, these are some ideas, maybe you can help me figure out what would work best: - Too demanding of herself (is there an adjective for that? Such as self-judgmental) - Fixated - idealist - self-judgmental

    Thank you for the advice, these are some ideas, maybe you can help me figure out what would work best:
    – Too demanding of herself (is there an adjective for that? Such as self-judgmental)
    – Fixated
    – idealist
    – self-judgmental

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