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A conflicted irreplaceable right hand man to a mob boss, finds his warnings disregarded in a tug of war between two warring bosses for his allegiance. ? ??
Sorry Grammer teacher but your sentence - 'dude, I think you're out with your commas. You defo don't need one after boss' - doesn't make any sense. Sorry but 'Millers Crossing' is actually a real film, the Logline is in the wrong spot.
Sorry Grammer teacher but your sentence – ‘dude, I think you’re out with your commas. You defo don’t need one after boss’ – doesn’t make any sense.
See lessSorry but ‘Millers Crossing’ is actually a real film, the Logline is in the wrong spot.
As a cursed detective struggles to contain the wolf within, he suspects he is being framed for murder. With the true killer desperate to expose the existence of werewolves, the detective must accept the beast within… or be lost to the wolf forever.
This probably isn't a Logline, even though the story sounds super cool. A Logline tells the basic story in 27 words or less, and is designed to market an idea before a lift goes from one floor to another. ( just in case you bump into Spielberg in the lift) I know it is very hard to do and I am guiltRead more
This probably isn’t a Logline, even though the story sounds super cool.
See lessA Logline tells the basic story in 27 words or less, and is designed to market an idea before a lift goes from one floor to another. ( just in case you bump into Spielberg in the lift)
I know it is very hard to do and I am guilty of going over the 27 word rule many times.
I am sure if you do Logline this right, we’ll be seeing your film reach the top.
An obsessed vigilante has to face the errors of his past when the son of one of his victims infiltrates his gang…
It needs a coma in there, as well it would be good if we had an extra word to explain the character, such as - An obsessed, (guilt ridden or single minded) vigilante confronts his sinfull past- blah blah And as well does this mean there was a gang of vigilante's or was he just part of a gang?
It needs a coma in there, as well it would be good if we had an extra word to explain the character, such as – An obsessed, (guilt ridden or single minded) vigilante confronts his sinfull past- blah blah
See lessAnd as well does this mean there was a gang of vigilante’s or was he just part of a gang?