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  1. Posted: August 29, 2012In: Public

    Dr. Caitlin Steele is a relationship phobic, yet successful NYC sex therapist who is hired as a consultant to treat a League One London football club in the wake of recent scandals. Sparks fly when she meets team captain and womanizer, Ray Brunner, intent on bringing his club to a long awaited championship before his retirement and who wants nothing to do with an American therapist on his turf.

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 29, 2012 at 8:05 pm

    I think it's okay, having the first name there is a good start. IMBD has the doctor's name from the fugitive in their log line and it works well. In the end I think you do what the log line needs.

    I think it’s okay, having the first name there is a good start. IMBD has the doctor’s name from the fugitive in their log line and it works well. In the end I think you do what the log line needs.

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2012In: Public

    When a soldier on leave from the Android Wars finds that his family and neighbourhood near Washington DC are missing, he must track down the hapless alien scientist responsible for the mishap.

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 26, 2012 at 6:20 pm

    It sounds like an exciting story, but the log line is too busy and a bit all over the place.

    It sounds like an exciting story, but the log line is too busy and a bit all over the place.

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  3. Posted: August 25, 2012In: Public

    Two rival gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive.

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 26, 2012 at 12:58 am

    I think it starts off very well and I wouldn't change the first part, but it does need more info to sweeten the pot and give us more insight on the story itself. But all in all it's a start.

    I think it starts off very well and I wouldn’t change the first part, but it does need more info to sweeten the pot and give us more insight on the story itself.
    But all in all it’s a start.

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