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  1. Posted: September 4, 2012In: Public

    A child psychologist wants to help Cole, a young boy who reminds him of a boy he once failed, looking into Cole's life Cole looks into his. Cole's secret, "I see dead people."

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 7:53 pm

    I think it is a great attempt, but there is a lot 'Cole' in there. But again you did well.

    I think it is a great attempt, but there is a lot ‘Cole’ in there. But again you did well.

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2012In: Examples

    A penniless writer who falls in love with a courtesan must defeat his jealousy and an evil Duke in order to rescue his lover from her underworld.

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 31, 2012 at 1:17 pm

    It would have been nice if we got a time and location of the story. The movie is set in the city of Paris in about 1899, unfortunatly above could be from the middle ages to the Joss Whedon's 'fire fly' lile future. But you did get the basic story nailed down though which is good.

    It would have been nice if we got a time and location of the story. The movie is set in the city of Paris in about 1899, unfortunatly above could be from the middle ages to the Joss Whedon’s ‘fire fly’ lile future.
    But you did get the basic story nailed down though which is good.

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2012In: Public

    A fireman is haunted by the flaming ghost of a man he failed to save from a burning building as it starts burning the survivors to death.

    justin Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 29, 2012 at 8:09 pm

    Nice. It's short and to the point. The only thing I would change is a comma after building for grammar impact and ' as he starts to incinerate the survivors to ash'. But that is just my spin on it though.

    Nice. It’s short and to the point. The only thing I would change is a comma after building for grammar impact and ‘ as he starts to incinerate the survivors to ash’. But that is just my spin on it though.

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