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How has a no-name chef managed to prepare dishes that command twenty thousand dollars a plate. What secrets are hiding in the freezer in his basement?
Good questions. No idea...
Good questions.
No idea…
See lessA group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.
Start with the inciting incident: "When a group of young activists abduct a senior politician, and ... murder confession" Then you'll see that there is a lack of story material for Act 2: all we have here is that "he insists he has proof that one of them is a government agent". In other words, thisRead more
Start with the inciting incident:
“When a group of young activists abduct a senior politician, and … murder confession”
Then you’ll see that there is a lack of story material for Act 2: all we have here is that “he insists he has proof that one of them is a government agent”.
In other words, this logline is super heavy towards the setup, but doesn’t promise much after that.
See lessA gangster keen to keep street credibility and protect his boss who wants to go legit will do anything including killing the bosses son.
If the gangster from the original logline is a baddy, and the son has most of the screen time, try writing the logline from the son's POV. "Protect his boss" is an open-ended goal. Typically, at the mid point this changes, and a more specific visual end goal is established. Nir asked who the MC is.Read more
If the gangster from the original logline is a baddy, and the son has most of the screen time, try writing the logline from the son’s POV.
“Protect his boss” is an open-ended goal. Typically, at the mid point this changes, and a more specific visual end goal is established.
Nir asked who the MC is. This is probably the most important question before moving to the next version of the logline.
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