1. Posted: September 25, 2015In:

    A man encounters a violent, time-traveling version of himself from 10 years in the future and the dangerous group of people determined to bring them both down.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Thanks for the comment, Geschwindt. I'm afraid of adding too much detail to avoid confusion.

    Thanks for the comment, Geschwindt. I’m afraid of adding too much detail to avoid confusion.

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  2. Posted: September 25, 2015In:

    A female bounty hunter holds a bar full of gangsters hostage in order to trap an escaped prisoner.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    That's condescending. You're supposed to comment on the logline not criticize the writer.

    That’s condescending. You’re supposed to comment on the logline not criticize the writer.

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2015In:

    A desperate CEO’s legally ambiguous plans to save his company are undermined when he is blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    "A desperate CEO struggles to save his company from going under while being blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee." Your theme does not need to appear in ther logline - just the main action plot.

    “A desperate CEO struggles to save his company from going under while being blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee.”

    Your theme does not need to appear in ther logline – just the main action plot.

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