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  1. Posted: January 6, 2015In: Public

    A struggling businessman has his world upended when a train explosion leaves him wounded in an untamed jungle. He'll have to survive the elements, the wildlife and a forgotten tribe if he ever wants to see his family again.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 7, 2015 at 2:06 pm

    Been thinking of doing this as a graphic novel- So the "people" won't really be people...probably bears. I draw them pretty good. And the places will be fictional but heavily based on reality. The Protagonist is tasked with going to see an eclectic business client who has set up a mansion waaaaaaaaaRead more

    Been thinking of doing this as a graphic novel-
    So the “people” won’t really be people…probably bears. I draw them pretty good.
    And the places will be fictional but heavily based on reality.

    The Protagonist is tasked with going to see an eclectic business client who has set up a mansion waaaaaaaaaay off the grid. And part of the travel to get there is a train over some Amazon like jungle.

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2014In: Public

    An ex couple accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and are forced to speak about their past, present and future.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 2:31 pm

    If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day? Don't know how to throw that in a concise line though- "When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about theirRead more

    If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day?
    Don’t know how to throw that in a concise line though-

    “When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about their past, present and an immanent wedding.”

    That’s still off a little but do you see what I’m getting at? A marriage of one of them to someone else would be like a bomb to their relationship.

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2014In: Public

    An ex couple accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and are forced to speak about their past, present and future.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 2:31 pm

    If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day? Don't know how to throw that in a concise line though- "When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about theirRead more

    If they are exes then (to me) the obvious time bomb is that someone is going to (re)marry very soon. Maybe the next day?
    Don’t know how to throw that in a concise line though-

    “When former lovers accidentally lock themselves in a basement during a New Years party they are forced to speak about their past, present and an immanent wedding.”

    That’s still off a little but do you see what I’m getting at? A marriage of one of them to someone else would be like a bomb to their relationship.

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