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  1. Posted: December 31, 2014In: Public

    When an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    I'll be the first to say the Foetal thing confused the hell outta me...What about this? "After a string of attacks on an abortion clinic mutilate a doctor and leave several of his patients dead- he sets out for revenge; only to learn their new target is his pregnant daughter." Which- I don't know whRead more

    I’ll be the first to say the Foetal thing confused the hell outta me…What about this?

    “After a string of attacks on an abortion clinic mutilate a doctor and leave several of his patients dead- he sets out for revenge; only to learn their new target is his pregnant daughter.”

    Which- I don’t know why the anti abortionist would attack a pregnant woman but I don’t understand a lot of things about all of that.

    You seemed to have otherworldly aspects in your original post…Not sure how that is in your story so I didn’t feel comfortable trying to shoehorn it in here.

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  2. Posted: December 31, 2014In: Public

    When an obstetrician turned part-man / part-foetal matter exacts his revenge on those responsible, he must rescue an innocent life to destroy a demon from his own mind made flesh.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 2:16 pm

    I'll be the first to say the Foetal thing confused the hell outta me...What about this? "After a string of attacks on an abortion clinic mutilate a doctor and leave several of his patients dead- he sets out for revenge; only to learn their new target is his pregnant daughter." Which- I don't know whRead more

    I’ll be the first to say the Foetal thing confused the hell outta me…What about this?

    “After a string of attacks on an abortion clinic mutilate a doctor and leave several of his patients dead- he sets out for revenge; only to learn their new target is his pregnant daughter.”

    Which- I don’t know why the anti abortionist would attack a pregnant woman but I don’t understand a lot of things about all of that.

    You seemed to have otherworldly aspects in your original post…Not sure how that is in your story so I didn’t feel comfortable trying to shoehorn it in here.

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  3. Posted: January 3, 2015In: Public

    A teenage vigilante with a warped view of reality and superheroes must save his hometown in the aftermath of a disastrous earthquake and the arrival of a dangerous pyromaniac.

    Kimmy Gorden
    Added an answer on January 6, 2015 at 1:57 pm

    THIS.

    THIS.

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