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When Nazi Germany blitz his beloved Poland, a patriotic farm boy is dragooned into the Wehrmacht to save his family. The Sturm und Drang to survive hell takes him far form home and God.
It would make a very cool title and maybe make the logline clearer if it was substituted for in there. Although your use of "dragooned" is correct for me I have only known dragoon as a term for a soldier, maybe "pressed" would be better. Sp. form - from. Maybe a hint of his ultimate goal and what hiRead more
It would make a very cool title and maybe make the logline clearer if it was substituted for in there. Although your use of “dragooned” is correct for me I have only known dragoon as a term for a soldier, maybe “pressed” would be better. Sp. form – from. Maybe a hint of his ultimate goal and what his struggles are.
With respect
Kerry
See lessA middleaged Canadian in LA, fights for his life when he is caught up in the 1990’s coastal rap war after a chance meeting with a legedary rapstar.
The white Canadian fortyish male who's ex has moved to LA, so kind of a "Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court" character but as your comments imply I am struggling to impart that. Any ideas. Thank-you very much for your comments and you title suggestion. Sincerely, Kerry kjkorberg@gmail.com
The white Canadian fortyish male who’s ex has moved to LA, so kind of a “Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Court” character but as your comments imply I am struggling to impart that. Any ideas.
Thank-you very much for your comments and you title suggestion.
Sincerely,
Kerry kjkorberg@gmail.com
See less"Set in a futuristic world where humans are controlled by their fascist government, a career criminal gets drawn into a deadly plot when he rescues a upper class woman from the secret police and has to depend on her to survive."
Goes without saying that a fascist government is in control. "a upper" should be an upper. Need some detail on deadly plot and ultimate goal.
Goes without saying that a fascist government is in control. “a upper” should be an upper. Need some detail on deadly plot and ultimate goal.
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