1. Posted: January 26, 2020In:

    When an avid lens collector takes a photo with a mysterious camera, he is captured in a murder he can only hope to escape.

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    Knightrider Mentor

    Yep, he should be a camera collector or just film restorer ?lens collector? just doesn?t sound right and I think general audience won?t have the knowledge of it so would waste time explaining the difference. It reminds me of the Red Dwarf episode where mutated development fluid allows to travel intoRead more

    Yep, he should be a camera collector or just film restorer ?lens collector? just doesn?t sound right and I think general audience won?t have the knowledge of it so would waste time explaining the difference.

    It reminds me of the Red Dwarf episode where mutated development fluid allows to travel into the photo within the confines of the photo

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2020In:

    After acceptance into a new gene-altering program, a nerdy, popular eSports gamer undergoes a risky, unknown side-effects procedure to become a NFL quarterback hoping to win a Super Bowl.

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    It feels like a modern Cinderella story, you could even throw in a ticking clock that the procedure is failing during the playoffs. My thinking was eSports are growing these days and are becoming massive and gamers (pro gamers) have fans like many sports stars.

    It feels like a modern Cinderella story, you could even throw in a ticking clock that the procedure is failing during the playoffs.

    My thinking was eSports are growing these days and are becoming massive and gamers (pro gamers) have fans like many sports stars.

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  3. Posted: January 14, 2020In:

    A married man begins dating a woman via lucid dream technology, but things get strange when she starts appearing when he?s awake.

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    I want to edit for clarity, but on mobile. The text should say ?fantasy woman? or ?dream woman? to just convey he isn?t supposed to be connected to anyone real via a dream, it is more of a dream manipulation to create a ?fantasy person? only he starts to see this fantasy in his reality

    I want to edit for clarity, but on mobile. The text should say ?fantasy woman? or ?dream woman? to just convey he isn?t supposed to be connected to anyone real via a dream, it is more of a dream manipulation to create a ?fantasy person? only he starts to see this fantasy in his reality

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