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When a former commando steals secret government documents, he races to prevent a warmongering dictator from obtaining powerful alien technology to start an interplanetary war.
As others have mentioned it is a little confusing, as why does the government have documents on alien technology and not do anything about it? Why has he gone rouge? Also the moment he is attempting to stop the warmonger he is already back in side with the good guys. I feel you could approach this lRead more
As others have mentioned it is a little confusing, as why does the government have documents on alien technology and not do anything about it?
Why has he gone rouge? Also the moment he is attempting to stop the warmonger he is already back in side with the good guys.
I feel you could approach this like ?The Mummy? where he is recruited reluctantly to help the government on a mission, but it just feels a little disconnected.
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Also, you post this in the horror so could you have the game somehow be the monster that if their characters die on screen they die in real life and should they quit it is death only way is to complete the game, but might need to move it away from Jumanji
Also, you post this in the horror so could you have the game somehow be the monster that if their characters die on screen they die in real life and should they quit it is death only way is to complete the game, but might need to move it away from Jumanji
See lessAfter a toxic incident occurs during an online gaming stream, the streamer and his close circle of friends are targeted in real life as the streamer attempts to find out who’s behind the attacks.
Everything feels disconnected, also we know little about Protagonist. I don?t feel people should be random, as they?re then not really an influence on the hero. Is his inner circle different from the famous gamers? Also are they in the same place as gaming live-streams don?t require you to be in samRead more
Everything feels disconnected, also we know little about Protagonist.
I don?t feel people should be random, as they?re then not really an influence on the hero.
Is his inner circle different from the famous gamers? Also are they in the same place as gaming live-streams don?t require you to be in same place.
If the core idea is gamers being hunted during a livestream you need to figure out how to connect it all.
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