1. Posted: December 19, 2019In:

    (First revision) When townsfolk reject an attention-craving man by magically transforming him into a ghost, he must seek the help of other rejected ghosts in order to find a way to break the curse before it becomes permanent.

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    Does ?reject? mean kill? Otherwise why does he become a ghost. You could have two stories here that run parallel. What if, a ghost from old school days is connected to a modern day case that mirrors their own? Isn?t being a ghost being dead and isn?t that permanent? I feel if you made out your charaRead more

    Does ?reject? mean kill? Otherwise why does he become a ghost.

    You could have two stories here that run parallel. What if, a ghost from old school days is connected to a modern day case that mirrors their own?

    Isn?t being a ghost being dead and isn?t that permanent? I feel if you made out your character joined a cult that dealt in spirituality and during a transcendent ritual he wanted out you could have an thriller inside the mind as they fought back against death

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  2. Posted: December 17, 2019In:

    An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge.

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    I feel like the tatto artist could play a role much like the TV show Blindspot. Maybe his partner is dead and the only clues are tattoos he did but doesn?t remember doing. What if murders were happening and the killer was leaving a calling card? A tattoo on his victims that this person is known forRead more

    I feel like the tatto artist could play a role much like the TV show Blindspot. Maybe his partner is dead and the only clues are tattoos he did but doesn?t remember doing.

    What if murders were happening and the killer was leaving a calling card? A tattoo on his victims that this person is known for doing, and he has to unravel the mystery behind his own design inspirations to unravel the true nature of this killer.

    Basically like others have said why does this person need to be a tattoo artist

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2019In:

    When he?s a contestant on Blind Date, a hopeless romantic bucks the trend and asks the important questions to find out who is really behind each door

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    I guess m y only concern is, can the 'Blinddate' show maintain for a full length movie, it feels like it is the 3rd Act, unless we cutaway to each person's story, but then it is not about the person asking the questions. If somehow he'd rigged the show, to get a lost love on there in the hopes of piRead more

    I guess m y only concern is, can the ‘Blinddate’ show maintain for a full length movie, it feels like it is the 3rd Act, unless we cutaway to each person’s story, but then it is not about the person asking the questions.

    If somehow he’d rigged the show, to get a lost love on there in the hopes of picking him over the other two, you’d naturally have conflict as he tries to win her over trying to beat the other two.

     

     

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