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  1. Posted: October 24, 2015In: Comedy

    When a disheartened pastor?s one-time love turned?risqu??reality star whirls back into his small town, he?risks his job by joining the cast of her reality show in hopes of winning her back.

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    Added an answer on October 25, 2015 at 7:27 am

    I like it, there are some hints to the conflict that might occur as you can imagine the situations that may challenge his faith, his commitment to this person ... Especially if the show was like a Bachelor combined with America's Next Top Model so have he is almost living in a world of sin. My onlyRead more

    I like it, there are some hints to the conflict that might occur as you can imagine the situations that may challenge his faith, his commitment to this person … Especially if the show was like a Bachelor combined with America’s Next Top Model so have he is almost living in a world of sin.

    My only nitpick might be losing a job may not be high enough stakes, granted this case job is tied to faith and losing that is a big deal.

    So it might be an interesting twist that his faith is restored by a group of people he’d thought he’d hate a bit like Miss Congeniality.

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  2. Posted: October 21, 2015In: Action

    When a gang of street kids are trapped in an abandoned high-rise by armed vigilantes, a homeless veteran must overcome his trauma or let the children die.

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    Added an answer on October 22, 2015 at 7:33 am

    I like it, I get a sense of the story, the acts, the character and the location. What could be a point of difference between this and films like The Raid or Dredd where both are working their way up levels of a highrise... that is down to you, but what those movies prove is the idea works, and in thRead more

    I like it, I get a sense of the story, the acts, the character and the location.

    What could be a point of difference between this and films like The Raid or Dredd where both are working their way up levels of a highrise… that is down to you, but what those movies prove is the idea works, and in the business a proven concept is almost as good as a franchise.

    I wish you the best of luck.

    I know some people dislike the term trauma, I don’t mind it so much, but I get the sense it maybe a little vague, but still think it is OK… Oh another thing, I would give your character a fear of heights, much like Jaws where the MC had a fear of water.

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  3. Posted: October 18, 2015In: SciFi

    In the aftermath of nuclear war, a bleak NASA scientist builds and enters a virtual recreation of the past to find a way to save civilisation, only for the system?s AI to determine humanity is beyond saving and attempts to kill her.

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    Added an answer on October 22, 2015 at 7:23 am

    Changed the logline so not as wordy, a problem I tend to have with a lot of my loglines, so it hopefully reads a lot better

    Changed the logline so not as wordy, a problem I tend to have with a lot of my loglines, so it hopefully reads a lot better

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