1. Posted: October 11, 2015In:

    A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect?s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

    Knightrider Mentor

    Also, the other reason I went with distrusting is because he's learnt so many secrets he has almost developed an addiction for them, like he always thinks people are hiding more and more no matter how deep into a suspect's mind he goes, this of course relates to him and how his own guilt and secretsRead more

    Also, the other reason I went with distrusting is because he’s learnt so many secrets he has almost developed an addiction for them, like he always thinks people are hiding more and more no matter how deep into a suspect’s mind he goes, this of course relates to him and how his own guilt and secrets are eating away at him as he has never confronted them.

    Hope that helps.

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2015In:

    A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect?s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

    Knightrider Mentor

    I guess my reason to say he is distrusting is because of the irony that someone who knows all your secrets can't trust anyone almost he's reached a point where he no longer can accept people for who they are he has to know it all we all have something to hide and in top of that he's the one buryingRead more

    I guess my reason to say he is distrusting is because of the irony that someone who knows all your secrets can’t trust anyone almost he’s reached a point where he no longer can accept people for who they are he has to know it all we all have something to hide and in top of that he’s the one burying the most.

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2015In:

    When a naive network engineer is suddenly disconnected from global mind-meld he must find a way to reconnect before government operatives hunt him down or sickness due to disconnection kills him.

    Knightrider Mentor

    I had an idea similar too this about a mind-net that allowed people to connect to information and share experiences rather than do them for themselves... Only difference was my was a take on the Men In Black formula that if the Net got hacked who enters the net and saves people, well in my story comRead more

    I had an idea similar too this about a mind-net that allowed people to connect to information and share experiences rather than do them for themselves… Only difference was my was a take on the Men In Black formula that if the Net got hacked who enters the net and saves people, well in my story coma patients.

    anyways the setup and incident seem there, but the ending seems a little cluttered. Maybe give a reason why people hunt him, maybe the mind net is secretly manipulating the way people view the world and he sees it for what it really is and now does he expose the truth

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