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As the United Nations attempt to bring stability to the city of Dajar after the fall of a tyrannical regime, the lines between peacekeepers and soldiers become blurred when a new warlord rises and begins to butcher his way through Somalia.
Yep, I am with the above comments... you can make your main character one of the peace keepers, who perhaps is driven to go beyond his remit because of a past failure and in his attempts to keep the peace becomes tyrannical in nature himself. Or, he or hishe can uncover a conspiracy to keep the instRead more
Yep, I am with the above comments… you can make your main character one of the peace keepers, who perhaps is driven to go beyond his remit because of a past failure and in his attempts to keep the peace becomes tyrannical in nature himself.
Or, he or hishe can uncover a conspiracy to keep the instability going to try and enforce their own laws and so he tries and to stop this but without evidence they are a villain of both countries.
You do have the background world just lacking a who, what to compliment the where and when
See lessIn a world where the police can get a warrant to search your memories, a former cop is implanted with murderous false memories and must find a way to have them removed before he’s caught and his mind read.
I guess if anything it proves the premise can be done well, Star Trek had some fantastic and well done story ideas, so my job would be to do it differently and uniquely enough that I explore new elements that weren't done in the episode. if I wrote something half as good as that I'd be happy
I guess if anything it proves the premise can be done well, Star Trek had some fantastic and well done story ideas, so my job would be to do it differently and uniquely enough that I explore new elements that weren’t done in the episode.
if I wrote something half as good as that I’d be happy
See lessWhen a group of graffiti writers beat up a random on the beaches of Sydney, it leads to a true life tale of redemption and forgiveness.
This could do with a little work, I get a hint of I Know What You Did Last Summer, but not sure if that is what you are going for. Personally, I would amp up the conflict... maybe your Hero is only with the Taggers through peer pressure and wanting to be accepted, then maybe he is witness to their aRead more
This could do with a little work, I get a hint of I Know What You Did Last Summer, but not sure if that is what you are going for.
Personally, I would amp up the conflict… maybe your Hero is only with the Taggers through peer pressure and wanting to be accepted, then maybe he is witness to their attack or forced into it. I also then wouldn’t make it a random, I would make it a friend that he turns his back on.
So, if not going for the horror take on this idea and want to focus more on redemption then I would have the story revolve around him returning to his small town only to meet the guy and he discovers that night after the beating his friend stop trying to be something special a writer or musician and he starts to encourage his friend to take it up again… of course we’d learn that he still insists on wanting to fit in and it has gotten him into a lot of trouble so he is using his friend to make him some money so you have that conflict also.
Just an idea as you could quite easily go horror movie with it, and Sydney has some great locations that could make the ity a unique area to have the story set.
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