1. Posted: July 6, 2016In:

    Using stolen prediction software a cocksure hacker makes a fortune in sports bets, but when it predicts his death within three days, he must find out how he dies without dying in the process.

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    I was thinking of adding two or three words about the Antagonist at the end: ...he'll be murdered in three days, by the mysterious group behind the software. Or is it better without?

    I was thinking of adding two or three words about the Antagonist at the end: …he’ll be murdered in three days, by the mysterious group behind the software. Or is it better without?

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2016In:

    Using a mysterious equation to predict how and when he’ll die, a wealthy businessman must kill a corrupt government official to prevent his untimely demise, but when things go awry he starts to question if he is preventing or creating his fate.

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    Well, I would say it is mysterious as he won't know of it's origin, but was handed to him from a previous user who stipulated in his will should he die when predicted to inform others. Also, this is the part that got my mind working wasn't the other guy was going to kill him, no just that his beingRead more

    Well, I would say it is mysterious as he won’t know of it’s origin, but was handed to him from a previous user who stipulated in his will should he die when predicted to inform others.

    Also, this is the part that got my mind working wasn’t the other guy was going to kill him, no just that his being alive would lead to his death, and it’s when my protagonist fails to take him out it appears he is the cause of his own demise and as it gets worse he must wonder would this have happened if hadn’t found out… I guess think cookie jar matrix.

    So yep ties into fate, control, determination.

    As for Sci-Fi I was planning on mixing it with our current world almost in the tone of Self/Less

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  3. Posted: May 7, 2016In:

    After an escaped convict forces a divorced mother to hide him, they fall in love and must flee to Canada to start a new life.

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    Yep would be tough as you'd need to portray the female as genuinely falling in love rather than suffering Stockholm syndrome.

    Yep would be tough as you’d need to portray the female as genuinely falling in love rather than suffering Stockholm syndrome.

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