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  1. Posted: July 27, 2016In: SciFi

    When her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son’s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm.

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    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 12:23 pm

    Yeah, agree with above. The sister being mad doesn't really add much. If the mother was "mad" then that would seemingly add to the plot, as then we wouldn't be sure what is happening is real or not. That also creates conflict in the movie as well as many would believe she is mad as she tries to warnRead more

    Yeah, agree with above. The sister being mad doesn’t really add much. If the mother was “mad” then that would seemingly add to the plot, as then we wouldn’t be sure what is happening is real or not. That also creates conflict in the movie as well as many would believe she is mad as she tries to warn others of the things coming through.

    It seems to me that by channeling, it is like you are connecting to a person’s soul perhaps, especially if letting things through from the other side.

    I would also add stakes by placing the boy in direct danger, that he becomes possessed by these spirits or something like that, that way we also get a tough choice for the protagonist at the end where she can close the portal and lose contact with her son, or leave it open but leave him open to attack as well.

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  2. Posted: July 26, 2016In: Action

    After she’s betrayed doing a one time mission for the government, a broke data smuggler must decode the data packet encrypted in her brain to use as a bargaining chip for her life.

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    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 10:58 am

    Thanks for the tip, I changed it slightly so she now has a more defined goal of wanting to get the information out of her head in exchange for her life. As while it is inside of her she is a target.

    Thanks for the tip, I changed it slightly so she now has a more defined goal of wanting to get the information out of her head in exchange for her life. As while it is inside of her she is a target.

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  3. Posted: July 26, 2016In: Action

    After she’s betrayed doing a one time mission for the government, a broke data smuggler must decode the data packet encrypted in her brain to use as a bargaining chip for her life.

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    Added an answer on July 26, 2016 at 5:03 pm

    Alt Version - Using her mind to encrypt and courier data packets, a broke smuggler takes a job for the government, but is betrayed and must unscramble what's in her head to survive.

    Alt Version – Using her mind to encrypt and courier data packets, a broke smuggler takes a job for the government, but is betrayed and must unscramble what’s in her head to survive.

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