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When a business graduate of the new generation wants some money for his new business he is up against the best and wins.
Yep, I agree with the comments above and also I would say that the stakes and conflict seem a bit lacking. Granted you say he / she goes up against the best, so we assume they are tough opposition, but saying "he wins" makes it seem it is actually very easy. He also doesn't seem to have anything toRead more
Yep, I agree with the comments above and also I would say that the stakes and conflict seem a bit lacking.
Granted you say he / she goes up against the best, so we assume they are tough opposition, but saying “he wins” makes it seem it is actually very easy. He also doesn’t seem to have anything to lose.
A recent business graduate, whose family name has granted him an easy life,?is given a week by his father to beat 10 of the best business graduates from around the world at a series of academical challenges if he is to be handed the family company.
That isn’t the best, but we get an idea of the character flaw : He has has had and easy life and is perhaps self entitled, the stakes: The company and his father’s respect, a ticking clock: A week, and the Opposition: The 10 Graduates.
See lessA charming hired hand falls for the same idealistic young woman as his close friend, an emerging revolutionary after they are driven to the rural south by growing violence and corruption in the city. (Besides log line help, would like to know if you would watch this movie?)
If doing it for modern times maybe even think about altering the settings completely. This has been done successfully with such movies as 10 things I hate about you. So rather than hired hand, you could go overboard and say 'A Warlords Minon' or 'A Wannabe West Coast Rapper' so take the elements andRead more
If doing it for modern times maybe even think about altering the settings completely. This has been done successfully with such movies as 10 things I hate about you.
So rather than hired hand, you could go overboard and say ‘A Warlords Minon’ or ‘A Wannabe West Coast Rapper’ so take the elements and modernise yes, but look for unique settings this story could play out in today’s world
See lessWith Earth on the brink of destruction, a despairing shuttle pilot leads a team to explore parallel worlds for a new home, but each new Earth they find has already met a cataclysmic fate within a year of own.
Fair comment. I understand the Interstellar comparison, it does share a similar basic premise, but the search for a new world when ours is in trouble isn't that new an idea it's what you do I with it. Anyways, I will take out mysterious as I think it is a valid pint. The other point that I guess I dRead more
Fair comment. I understand the Interstellar comparison, it does share a similar basic premise, but the search for a new world when ours is in trouble isn’t that new an idea it’s what you do I with it.
Anyways, I will take out mysterious as I think it is a valid pint.
The other point that I guess I didn’t get across was these Earths are all devoid of life that they may have got to it via different methods but each world has reached the same apocoliptic fate so our team figure out why as it seems our world is next, but as the story unravels we discover these Earths are simulations each designed to figure out man’s fate and the outlook isn’t good.
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