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When experimental mind control technology is stolen, a cold and ruthless assassin is hired to retrieve it and kill the thief, but the more he discovers, the more he realizes he stole it.
Thank you for both of your comments. I will say I had originally wrote a logline, that I ended up scrapping, that started with him discovering his mind was controlled, but as I played with the story from that starting point, I just felt it was always leaning to him not knowing, and allowing for thatRead more
Thank you for both of your comments. I will say I had originally wrote a logline, that I ended up scrapping, that started with him discovering his mind was controlled, but as I played with the story from that starting point, I just felt it was always leaning to him not knowing, and allowing for that twist when he does discover what happened, and he may have, regardless of the fact he wasn’t in control, killed his friends, partners etc.
Yep, coming up with the how and the why is something I am working towards, was he set up to take the fall as at the start he was perfect to do so, maybe he stumbled onto a plan, or was simply hired because he was seen as weak and controllable and thus easily manipulated, these are all elements I am working on.
However, as I say I love the feedback it is a great help.
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It does, it helps a great deal. So, really need to nail a description for my MC, and tie that to the story. So on the surface it is about a team trying to obtain codes to stop a potential war, but underneath – we have the characters inner journey, which could be one of redemption to greed to discovering faith, but whatever I choose I must tie it to the story.
See lessWhen a vindictive cyber-terrorist steals nuclear activation codes, a distrusting special agent must use an experimental machine to enter his mind and retrieve them before he instigates a global conflict.
It does, it helps a great deal. So, really need to nail a description for my MC, and tie that to the story. So on the surface it is about a team trying to obtain codes to stop a potential war, but underneath - we have the characters inner journey, which could be one of redemption to greed to discoveRead more
It does, it helps a great deal. So, really need to nail a description for my MC, and tie that to the story. So on the surface it is about a team trying to obtain codes to stop a potential war, but underneath – we have the characters inner journey, which could be one of redemption to greed to discovering faith, but whatever I choose I must tie it to the story.
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