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When secrets threaten to surface and trust is about to shatter; a husband and wife independently devise their own plan to kill the other before their pasts are revealed.
I would agree with Tony. I think a log line can kickstart the whole creative process. You may think of an idea and devise a log line to remind yourself of it as you begin development. In the case of my log line above I do know all the twists and turns of the film but the second act isn't completelyRead more
I would agree with Tony. I think a log line can kickstart the whole creative process. You may think of an idea and devise a log line to remind yourself of it as you begin development. In the case of my log line above I do know all the twists and turns of the film but the second act isn’t completely fleshed out and I haven’t really began development. It is an idea I have swimming around and had a go at a logline when I saw a competition for logline of undeveloped screenplays.
Perhaps you think the logline is vague? The story doesn’t work?
The logline highlights what the story is but there are many twists and turns that I wouldn’t want to give away in a logline.
See lessA paranoid lawyer must confront his own personal demons when his elderly client strikes comparisons with Adolf Hitler, raising a dangerous hate mob.
That's fine I appreciate the feedback as this is what it is about. I have done a lot of research into the 'conspiracies' of Hitler and the South American conspiracies were often mentioned and I do refer to them in the script. The point of the film is the questions as to whether this man is Hitler anRead more
That’s fine I appreciate the feedback as this is what it is about. I have done a lot of research into the ‘conspiracies’ of Hitler and the South American conspiracies were often mentioned and I do refer to them in the script. The point of the film is the questions as to whether this man is Hitler and how people have jumped on the bandwagon due to the name without uncovering any truth.
Of course then if he actually is Hitler is an answer for the end of the film but the story is there to allow people to question it and on how a name means more than an identity.
I did consider setting it in America, with ‘him’ having traveled into the country from the South but moved it to London as it was easier to write seeing as I am English.
I will have a think about it all though so thank you for the feedback. I knew this was a questionable topic when I thought it up but using Hitler was more because the name has so many evil connotations.
See lessA paranoid lawyer must confront his own personal demons when his elderly client strikes comparisons with Adolf Hitler, raising a dangerous hate mob.
I posted a logline for this idea months ago and included the era and was advised to leave it out as at this stage it wasn't overly important. As for the hate mob it is set in London and the mob is risen via a war veteran who knows no other way to fight for justice unless it involves conflict. This iRead more
I posted a logline for this idea months ago and included the era and was advised to leave it out as at this stage it wasn’t overly important. As for the hate mob it is set in London and the mob is risen via a war veteran who knows no other way to fight for justice unless it involves conflict. This is a subplot to the main plot but the hate mob are members of the general public angry at this man being defended despite this conspiracy.
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