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When a privileged na?ve young woman is attacked by an enraged lunatic accusing her of assassinating his wife, her sheltered world comes crashing down around her with the possibility he may be right.
I really enjoyed this log line and can see it opening up many conflicts internally and externally. I'd perhaps only keep the descriptions of the characters to one or two, so a privileged naive woman, or a privileged young woman. Just seems a lot of description. Otherwise a good log line.
I really enjoyed this log line and can see it opening up many conflicts internally and externally. I’d perhaps only keep the descriptions of the characters to one or two, so a privileged naive woman, or a privileged young woman. Just seems a lot of description. Otherwise a good log line.
See lessA solitary ruthless cyborg is hunted by a government agency, but to trust others and become human again is his only hope of escape
The tone and genre is specified here. Sci-fi all the way especially using the term cyborg. Reminds me of a reverse on The Terminator. Feel the line needs a little work though as it seems a little disjointed. It also tells us how he needs to escape and it may be something worth finding out ourselvesRead more
The tone and genre is specified here. Sci-fi all the way especially using the term cyborg. Reminds me of a reverse on The Terminator. Feel the line needs a little work though as it seems a little disjointed. It also tells us how he needs to escape and it may be something worth finding out ourselves when we watch the film.
See lessAfter falling for the woman who defrauded his company, a now bankrupt playboy hatches the perfect plan to win her heart: he'll bust her out of prison.
Really intriguing. The logline is full of irony which gives the idea a real unusual spin. The prison break is something we have all seen before but this is a really original approach to it. Only thing is I'm slightly unsure on the genre. Feels like it could be a comedy, thriller or action? The termRead more
Really intriguing. The logline is full of irony which gives the idea a real unusual spin. The prison break is something we have all seen before but this is a really original approach to it. Only thing is I’m slightly unsure on the genre. Feels like it could be a comedy, thriller or action? The term playboy highlights the character but perhaps brings a comedy element to it. A great idea though which ever way you play it.
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