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After a group of homeless friends moves into a train station to escape a shelter bully, its leader takes a stand to protect them and give them the best New Year.
I like the first part, "After a group of homeless friends... escape a shelter bully". It's enticing. But after that, the second part seems unclear. What do they now need protecting from? What has the New Year got to do with their goals for safety?
I like the first part, “After a group of homeless friends… escape a shelter bully”. It’s enticing.
But after that, the second part seems unclear. What do they now need protecting from? What has the New Year got to do with their goals for safety?
See lessWhen a son is chosen to take over his father’s billion dollar company, he must adjust to the world of business and his newfound power.
My first reaction to this logline is: So what? I don't mean that in a rude way, but there is nothing there to interest me. I don't care about big business growth and I would say very few movie-goers would either. But I would care about a guy who has a major struggle to cope with sudden and unexpecteRead more
My first reaction to this logline is: So what?
I don’t mean that in a rude way, but there is nothing there to interest me. I don’t care about big business growth and I would say very few movie-goers would either. But I would care about a guy who has a major struggle to cope with sudden and unexpected pressure to perform something he has no skill or aptitude for… but somehow finds the way to succeed anyway.
I’d suggest you rewrite this logline, focusing on the character’s story, not the business side.
Think of business related movies such as The Wolf of Wall Street, or The Pursuit of Happiness. These aren’t really about business, but about the characters.
See lessWhen a dangerous CME is earthbound, and a satellite reflector won’t work, NASA, learning they have four days till impact, release a female hacker from prison, to find the problem and save the planet.
I really like this! My one gripe would be that I feel the female hacker should be more notorious or something, otherwise, I just don't buy that NASA would turn to her. She'd really must have a greater background to make her more essential to the plot (perhaps she worked for NASA designing the systemRead more
I really like this!
My one gripe would be that I feel the female hacker should be more notorious or something, otherwise, I just don’t buy that NASA would turn to her. She’d really must have a greater background to make her more essential to the plot (perhaps she worked for NASA designing the system before she was jailed in disgrace for hacking.)
Yes, it’s true that the whole ‘bad guy called in to save the earth’ has been done a lot, but no reason you can’t do a fresh take on it. The concept oozes with possible conflict. Does she have a scorned ex-lover at NASA? Does she have a secret criminal agenda she’s covertly trying to pull? All these things and more make me intrigued. I’d see this movie.
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