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  1. Posted: March 12, 2017In: Drama

    A time-traveling Jewish scientist goes back to 1891 to smother Hitler in his crib, only to return to the future to find out a different Fuhrer was able to win the war, making Europe a permanently enslaved continent and the U.S. its fascist ally. Now he has to return to the past, and kill himself before he can kill Hitler.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2017 at 8:45 am

    I feel that the explanation "... making Europe ...and the US Its fascist Ally" is too much detail for the Logline.Consider something more like:When A time-traveling Jewish scientist goes back and smothers Hitler in his crib, he returns to a Europe enslaved under a (worse/extreme/horrific) regime. HiRead more

    I feel that the explanation “… making Europe …and the US Its fascist Ally” is too much detail for the Logline.

    Consider something more like:

    When A time-traveling Jewish scientist goes back and smothers Hitler in his crib, he returns to a Europe enslaved under a (worse/extreme/horrific) regime. His only hope is to travel back and stop himself before… (he is imprisoned/his machine is discovered).

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