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  1. Posted: March 13, 2017In: Drama

    When his vibrant friend turns seriously ill during a road trip, and anxious recluse must get her home through a strange and threatening world.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2017 at 5:25 pm

    "Just curious, why doesn?t he take her to a doctor?" Good question. Maybe I need to address that in the logline. In the screenplay, it's simply because it's late at night, in the middle of nowhere, and the last thing she communicates is a great desire to get herself home.

    “Just curious, why doesn?t he take her to a doctor?”

    Good question. Maybe I need to address that in the logline.

    In the screenplay, it’s simply because it’s late at night, in the middle of nowhere, and the last thing she communicates is a great desire to get herself home.

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  2. Posted: March 13, 2017In: Drama

    When his vibrant friend turns seriously ill during a road trip, and anxious recluse must get her home through a strange and threatening world.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2017 at 9:52 am

    Or..."When an anxious recluse agrees to take his cancer-fighting friend on one last adventure, he must cope with the threatening world alone when she falls fatally ill."Which works best?

    Or…

    “When an anxious recluse agrees to take his cancer-fighting friend on one last adventure, he must cope with the threatening world alone when she falls fatally ill.”

    Which works best?

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  3. Posted: March 11, 2017In: Drama

    A wannabe prep girl moves to a new Washington Town far away from home, and will do anything it takes to make it to the top of the social food chain, including murder.

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    Added an answer on March 13, 2017 at 8:50 am

    Interesting, but I feel we need to know who/what is stopping her from achieving her goal.

    Interesting, but I feel we need to know who/what is stopping her from achieving her goal.

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