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A divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.
Original logline: "Having paid a man to “look after” his ex-wife, an abusive divorcee seeks revenge upon discovering the very private investigator he hired has begun a secret relationship with her."
Original logline:
“Having paid a man to “look after” his ex-wife, an abusive divorcee seeks revenge upon discovering the very private investigator he hired has begun a secret relationship with her.”
See lessA divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.
Hi NisVinten, The idea of the story is based on a tragic protagonist who cannot live for himself after breaking up with his ex. Whilst the story has a lot to do with the events as I've tried best to describe them in the logline, the story is very much not a love triangle, rather it is more of a charRead more
Hi NisVinten,
The idea of the story is based on a tragic protagonist who cannot live for himself after breaking up with his ex. Whilst the story has a lot to do with the events as I’ve tried best to describe them in the logline, the story is very much not a love triangle, rather it is more of a character study of the protagonist’s struggles of living without the very person he has obsessed about for most of his adult life. The protagonist has however remained distant friends with the ex, but the feeling of friendship is not mutual and this is what is eating away at the protagonist since he cannot sustainably live when he maintains little-to-no respect for himself in the aftermath of his relationship ending.
Thank you for the suggestion however since I can see that idea making sense in perhaps less bittersweet ending than I’ve got planned for this story.
See lessA divorcé redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.
Gave it some thought and I went back to your original revision and came up with this: "A divorcee redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship." There's a lot of revisions here haha. Surely one of theRead more
Gave it some thought and I went back to your original revision and came up with this:
“A divorcee redirects his self-hatred upon the very private investigator he had paid to spy on his ex after discovering their newly established relationship.”
There’s a lot of revisions here haha. Surely one of these are going places somewhat by now. What do you thing of this one?
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